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Winter, Year 1

Where is the snow? As autumn fades into winter, the temperatures are still unusually high, and excepting areas in high elevations and of normally frigid temperatures, snow refuses to fall. Even rain is hard to find these days, and as the crystal clear skies beat down upon the earth, not a cloud in sight, one can begin to wonder what is going on with the world. The golden grass is crisp and dry, and though the fires have slowed with the seasons, there is still a hint of smoke in the air, and every now and then a small one crops up. The rivers are beginning to dwindle to a trickle, and mud has dried into thick cracked clay.
Character Cyran
Other
37 Years
Ventri
Feline/Cheetah
Homeless
Demisexual
Ventri
#1
Name: Cyran (https://amarna-rpg.com/member.php?action=profile&uid=97)
OOC Account: https://amarna-rpg.com/member.php?action=profile&uid=94
Species/Breed: Feline/Cheetah
Human Height: 4ft
Shifted Height: 3ft
Alliance: Ventri
Other information: adopted from Angie
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Female
25 Years
Vata
Homeless
Heterosexual
Administrator
#2
NOT ACCEPTED YET

Most things look good, however, we did notice that it looked like he had two types of magic under his magic description (telekinesis and teleportation). While they can add a second ability per the magic rules after purchasing the store item and 25 posts, they cannot start with two types of magic. Once this is fixed, let a staff member know. Everything else looks good. Thank you!


Cyran
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Other
37 Years
Ventri
Feline/Cheetah
Homeless
Demisexual
Ventri
#3
Hoofbeats I fixed it, sorry about that
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Female
30 Years
Vata
Homeless
Posts: 6
Threads: 2
Moderator
#4
A C C E P T E D

Thank you and accepted. Everything looks good and can't wait to see him around. Looks like a fun character.


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